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the bath tub is empty by ~discontentbeauty:icondiscontentbeauty:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Humor > Open


So clever and artistic,
pain and truth gush from your veins
Eyes wild and frantic,
seeking the highest of highs.
Subtle is real
you must read between the lines!
Drown, beauty, drown
Where are you going?
Down
Down!
The clutch is gone,
you stare in horror as your precious wisdom exhales
one
last
time.
"But it all seemed so real!"
you'll say.
I guess no one told you
nothing is real
©2005-2009 ~discontentbeauty
:icondiscontentbeauty:

Author's Comments

with a touch of sarcasm.


fuck titles.

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~MorgantownBound Apr 11, 2005, 9:19:09 AM
hmmmmmm

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A REAL friend stabs you in the front.
:icontranzintel:
~tranzintel Apr 11, 2005, 11:46:26 AM
Nothing is real or No-thing is real?
:icontranzintel:
~tranzintel Apr 11, 2005, 12:42:28 PM
The title is my favorite part because; I’ve been doing some research on Lake Volta and combining it with what I learned in my excellent earth science class I attended while out in the desert.
The bath tub is empty 25 snake holding wives to blame. Freed fresh water entering the ocean current is like sand entering the gears of a watch. So, dress warm and put your Ice pick in your pocket because oceans transfer heat all lakes do is stagnate.
:icontranzintel:
~tranzintel Apr 11, 2005, 1:55:54 PM
No there's no light
No there's no time
You Ain't Got Nothing
Your life was just a lie
:icontranzintel:
~tranzintel Apr 11, 2005, 1:56:11 PM
No there's no light
No there's no time
You Ain't Got Nothing
Your life was just a lie
:iconlucidenigma:
~lucidenigma Apr 15, 2005, 2:48:10 PM
awesome piece of writing. bravo!

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:peace: chelsie :peace:
:iconsoulwrai:
~soulwrai May 3, 2005, 11:45:02 AM
another kick ass piece

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my other account [link]

teehee! :boogie: energy drinks will make life fun!
:iconbitterlysweet:
~bitterlysweet Nov 25, 2005, 2:40:14 PM
very likely my favorite thing you've ever written...
aside from that wonderfully erotic piece we wrote portraying a certian someone..lol
:icondiscontentbeauty:
~discontentbeauty Nov 26, 2005, 5:56:47 PM
oh my goodness.
i had completely forgot about that. that was the funniest thing ever. sex god. ahahaha

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We're all pawns, my dear.
:kitty:


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