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like napalm by ~discontentbeauty:icondiscontentbeauty:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


The wind howls
through the trees
and amongst the leaves
Here I sit,
drifting through you too
amongst random recollections
So charming
yet unexplainable
Nothing has changed,
everything has changed
I sing when I can,
I sing for the lost moments
and the delicate brush of fingers
I thought I’d trudged forward,
on from all of this
I lied to you,
I lied to me
So naïve,
can’t seem to push forward
But I do anyway
forward and backward
all at once and in sync
The night gets to me,
the wind and trees
never-ending thoughts and soft melodies
all intertwining
and jumbled so majestically
But through all of that
I ask nothing.
Don’t mind me
and my
self-induced injections of melancholy
Smile,
that’s all that matters.
©2004-2009 ~discontentbeauty
:icondiscontentbeauty:

Author's Comments

the words just keep coming.
thank you.

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~notrust May 27, 2004, 10:03:24 PM
I love the lines...

"Nothing has changed,
everything has changed"


...as well as the very last two lines...very beautifully written...:blackrose:

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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
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~caelyx May 28, 2004, 6:34:09 AM
it's beautiful, especially

"jumbled so majestically"

Powerfully emotive.

(Bonus points for bothering with the correct use of diaresis in naïve ).

--
There's nothing as beautiful or frustrating as a blank page.
"In the silence of your absence, /Taste turns to ashes, words to dust. /Clouds become dreams, nightmares in blue. /Everything different, without you."
:iconbitterlysweet:
~bitterlysweet May 28, 2004, 7:29:39 AM
This has a nice, floaty quality to it that I haven't seen often, however you have done a wonderful job pulling it off.
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~xxstellarxx Jun 2, 2004, 11:21:32 AM
Here I sit,
drifting through you too
amongst random recollections
So charming
yet unexplainable...:heart:

beautiful.

--
i'm an extraordinary machine
:iconjomina:
~Jomina Jun 4, 2004, 4:26:02 AM
it was the last lines :
Don’t mind me
and my
self-induced injections of melancholy
Smile,
that’s all that matters.

that got me the most.

absolutely love this piece. nice work! :)

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:iconlucidenigma:
~lucidenigma Jun 9, 2004, 4:14:51 PM
agh! i am so glad you wrote this.. yeap.. i love it. thanks.

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:peace: chelsie :peace:
:iconameas-qua:
=Ameas-Qua Jun 13, 2004, 8:06:53 PM
i want to kiss your eyes...

to see what the memory of your tears tastes like.,

:+fav:

--
Ameas Qua.
:icondiscontentbeauty:
~discontentbeauty Jun 13, 2004, 9:50:19 PM
awww. :blowkiss:

--
We're all pawns, my dear.
:kitty:


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~acontaminatedmind Jul 5, 2004, 7:11:59 PM
i really like this also :) i liked the ending especially as i think many people here seem to appreciate. i like the fact that there's a few rhymes but not a lot so that it does flow very nicely. :)
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