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Thinking about roots while I
sigh again and swallow harshly.
I feel a little naked,
completely unraveled.
Where is the beauty today?
A root takes earth with a firm grasp
and slowly the process of growth succeeds
to emerge from the dirt.
Skin feels scaly and undesirable,
my mind is overloaded with consistent pollution
this nonsense fills me up,
overflows my being.
Where did I go yesterday?
Two roots embrace and entwine together,
naturally neither noticed the lack of nutrients below.
There is a slow fate of suffocation ahead,
we say it is inexorable.  
For some reason this does not matter,
on and on we grow further into the ground
and what is growing above?
A mixture of loathing and needing -
we have produced this ourselves.
There are flowers on our tree
of radiant red and sensational blue,
not everything we've birthed is toxic.
But the air we emit holds more than
we could ever admit willingly.
Where will our flowers fall?
©2008-2009 =discontentbeauty
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This is raw.
A little like me.

I said it wouldn't be pretty. I'm not happy with it.
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Nice to see you're writing. Sometimes I see improvements I can make to old things I've written. Change can be a good thing. I have a huge amount of works in progress that I'm not happy with yet.
thanks....any thoughts on the poem?

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It made me think you're needing a more meaningful relationship? That you feel it's like that bouquet of flowers where the water in the vase is going stagnant. The flowers still look good, but that will be short lived without a cutting of the stems, and fresh water.
you read this to me and I skeeted a little.........in my heart
beautiful metaphoric writing... this hits home... hard times for me recently so this is beautifully poignant. I love it

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i tend to wander down the wrong rabbit hole quite frequently. :boogie:
thanks...this was kind of hard to write...there are a lot of things that i think about , but i don't feel bold enough to actually let it out.

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that is a tantalizing thought... you holding something back with your amazing writing... =)

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i tend to wander down the wrong rabbit hole quite frequently. :boogie:
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I wonder if this chapter in your life is still open. If so, that may be why you aren't happy with it yet. Perhaps it still feels like a page is missing because it has not yet been written.

I'm going to start writing again today. Hah. Just like that, I'm going to write. Not going to overthink it or try to perfect it, I'm just going to get it out.

You give me inspiration.
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"What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say." -- Ralph Waldo Emerson

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You're right....it is still open. And naturally I don't know what to do.


I'm glad I inspire you.....I don't feel like I do that often enough to the people around me that need it. So that makes me ultra happy.

:hug:

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